Wednesday, July 18, 2007

讀詩後的意識流

為什麼要分離?

眼淚不會說話,但,從她臉頰上的液體倒映中,他彷彿看見自己在問,為何分離?如何能夠這樣決定?她的眼淚如她眼中的深邃一般,透明,卻絲毫不見清晰。

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"黯然消魂者,唯別而已矣"

楊過在絕情谷等不到小龍女,而太陽已下山...
張無忌與小昭被迫分手,小昭乘著船,緩緩飄去...
蕭峰抱著已死去的心愛阿朱,徘迴在青石橋邊...

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妳的一切在今日始終是我的流浪
我只好用詩尋找流失的歸屬
下筆才發現盡是情意的斷句

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"眼見得眼見得那青梗
一路細弱的彎下去彎下去
是不能承受歲月與香氣的重量吧

搖落安足論
瘦與孤清,乃至
輾轉反側。只恨無新句
如新葉,抱寒破空而出
趁他人未說我先說"

-周夢蝶 (花心動 之二)

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信否?路是天下有心人
大手握小手
一步一步走過來的

2 comments:

eatgod said...

good writing.
so when are you going to write for competition?

Chien Chien said...

Writing, in its purest form, is a solitary pursuit. It takes more than just talent and a strong will but also above all, diligence. Unfortunately I'm lacking in all three aspects, so I'm afraid this is extent of my involvement.

But I'm always thankful for the encouragement, Pete. The mind has been quite active lately, so there may be more esoteric mumbling to come. Stay tuned!